小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

I have a friend whose name is bob,he is a handsome man and he has a black hair, he also is an honest man,he never tells lies. We usually walk to a river which behind his house ,we play water,catch fish,there is our free place .I love him so much.