采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错。
I have a friend whose name is bob,he is a handsome man and he has a black hair, he also is an honest man,he never tells lies. We usually walk to a river which behind his house,we play water,catch fish,there is our free place.I must love him so much too.