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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨。
Good morning，my friends and teachers， Some of us students are ignoring personal safety on the way to school and back home．many student may give some reasons for their behavior , but there is no excuse for such dangerous behavior! they don't observe traffic regulation , walking in a opposite direction and chasing each other when they go back their home , their also chatting with other while their are riding , they even going on the motorway . how dangerous is it! we must give some suggestions to them and prevent them from accidents. we must teach them to keep away from the vehicle turning around , keep in mind "red light for stop , green light for go" and take a crosswalk when crossing the driveway. Life is above all. My friends and my classmates, to value our lives, we can never be careful enough on the way. Thanks for listening!
