高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

My favourite sport Everybody need sport and everyone like it.As a university student,we should sport everyday to ensure that we have a good body to study.The football is my favourite hobbies. I love football by chance. One day,I picked a football in my way,then I start play it with my friends.I was very happy because I found I love it.After,I played football with friends day and night.We often have match after school. My favourite football star is beikehanmu.He is Englang man and he is interesting.My dream is become a professional football player like he.