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作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂，需要多使用一些高级词汇；文章层次较为清晰；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
When we come to this world,when we have life,we will face to everything and we should do something to make our life become significance. What is significative things? People offten say, knowledge is power. So we should learn some it to improve our thought, enlarge this world people had known. We also use knowledge to create wealth. in addition to this, we should go out to see this word. There has a well-known saying "The world is very large, I want to see".We should travel, make some good friends , have a happy family.
