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When we come to this world,when we have life,we will face to everything and we should do something to make our life become significant. What are important things? People often say, knowledge is power. So we should learn, to improve our mind, to enlarge this world people had known. We also use knowledge to create wealth. In addition to this, we should go out to see this word. There was a well-known saying the world is very large, I want to see.We should travel, make some good friends, have a happy family.
