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Some people think inviting large foreign companies to set up factories in developing countries is helpful for local economy, while others think that the foreign companies should not be allowed to build their factories in developing countries, instead, local companies should be encouraged in order to develop local economy. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
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Whether adopting foreign capitals as part of the driving force of the developing countries' economy development has long been an argument. You can find some factories operated by foreign companies in many developing countries already, while the negtive influence on the developing countries' economy systerm still is a concern for many people. Admittedly, it is obvious that foreign companies have absolute advantages in the competiton with the local companies. Compared with local companies, big foreign companies always have more financial support and more advanced technology which can help the big companies to work more efficently and produce more competitive products. Therefore, it would leave limited room for the local companies to grow and the local market may be under the threat of being manipulated by the foreign companies. Nevertheless, the developing countries are confronted with the fact that it would take them a long time to set up their own economy system if they do it independently. For the developing countries generally tend to be less developed in almost every aspects including finance, infrastructure, technology, human resources which are all very important elemnts of promoting the economy development. it would take the government a long time to finish all these ground floor work especially given the fact that they almost have no revenue income. On the other hand, the world is connected than ever before, any isolation may only lead to lag behind. Without the communication with foreign companies, the local companies probably end up with old fashioned products and lifless economy environment. To conclude, an oppen attitude towards foreign capitals may resault in a huge pressure on the local companies, but it still worth to invite them into the developing countries considering the long term development of the country. Afer all, the huge profits brought by the foreign companies can help the local governments to build their own infrasture system quickly which is the basement of the economy development. Thus, personally, i think the foreign companies should be encouraged in a proper way.
