拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Thank you for your letter.It is normal that you have this feeling.In my city,many students have a lot of after-school classes too.If you are really stressed out,here are some suggestions for you: On the one hand,you should sit down and communicate with your parents.So that,they will understand your feelings.Remember proper communication is the key to solve the problem.On the other hand,It is common for parents to want successful kids.In their opinion,after-school classes are helpful your study.So if they insist that you should take those classes,try your best to understand them.After all,they are the people who love you most.I hope things can work out.