正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Thank you for your letter.It is normal that you have this feeling.In my city,many students have a lot of after-school classes too.If you really stressed out,here are some suggestions for you: On the one hand,you should sit down and communicate with your parents.So that,they will understand your feelings.Please remember proper communication is the key to solve the problem.On the other hand,it is common for parents to want successful kids.In their opinions,after-school classes are helpful.So if they insist that you should take those classes,try your best to understand them.After all,they are the people who love you most.I hope things can work out.