单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;文中有几处句子错误;结构良好,但是语言不流畅。
Mimi is my friend she is a student she likes sing and dance she is eight years old she is very lovely she has long hairs she has big eyes she has small mouth she is wearing a red skirt she is wearing a pair of black stockings she is my best friend