邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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Since 2010 years,there have happend one after another violence matters many times.It is so suprised.And,makeing us to consider that How we would improve the safety of campus. First,there is need some security guards who can go the rounds from time to time.second,we should stall a lot of pick-up head to supervie everything in the campus.