小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文中句子偏简单，可增加从句使用量。

I have a good friend, she is my colleague. she is plain looking and a little short. but she is good and honest, and ready to help others. once I fogot to bring my key when I went out of dormitory. at that time, she was out and was shopping. I called her to go back. she went back soon. I was deeply moved by it. from now on, we talk about anything and to be good friends.