2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

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As a middle school student,it is necessary to buid a good relationship with our teachers. First at all,what relationship between students and their teachers?In mu opinion,I think a good relationship with our teachers like friend,however,sometimes,it likes parents and us.Second,how to build the relationship?I tjinl it's important for us to know our teachers and communicate with them usually.For example,wecan ask our teaches for help when we were faced with problems.What's more,we can hold more activities with our teachers to increace our relationship. In the end,I hopeevery students can build a good relationship with their teachers.