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2013年3月2日雅思大作文真题:Information Technology

发布时间:2013-08-01 17:16浏览次数:2404
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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadavantages?


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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇量积累不错,一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,有个别拼写错误;很好的运用了从句,同时句法错误极少。

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It is undeniable that one of the most distinguish change in 21century is in the field of education. With the developement of the internet, many people can learn without attending school and they can even get qualifications if they fulfill all the courses in the disternce learning. Some people concern the influence of the real teacher's absence in the learning process, while in my point of view, i think the benifits overweight the shortcoming. It is true that teachers play an important role in students' learning. Not only they can teach students the knowledge in a way more easily understood, they could also give students many inspires in exploring the fields they are learning. Besides, the teachers's attitudes towards life may also have an impact on students, which actually is very important in student characteristics shaping. furthermore, teaching by the teacher usually means that students learn with other students from all walks of life, which benefits them to develop their ability of interacting with others. Nevertheless, distance learning still rewards students more. Obviously, distance learning offer students more oppotunities to learn. In the era of classroom learning, students only those who can aford the tuition fees could have the chance to get educated abroad, while on the internet, many cheep or free classes from the famous education institution are available and more students can have the qualited lessons without worrying about the money and flying to another country. Meanwhile, distance learning also give students the freedom of learning. Without concerning the high invest in education, They can learn anything they are interested in, not just learn for finding an employment. Most importantly, distance learning make learning become an life-long activity. Without attending the classrooms, learning on the internet, people can learn anytime and anywhere, which definitely is good for the long term development of the whole society. in summary, although learning with a tutor personally is really intimated and may prevent us from losing humanity, distance learning is more likely give us the true pleasure of learning, which should be the true essence of the education and learning. Thus, i believe distance learning is more advantagable.

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