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There are basically two ways to go to school.By bus and by bicycle. Conpared with bus and biycle,first of all,students go to school by bus can save time to let students arrive at school on time.Meanwile,go to school by bus also can save energy.However,go to school by bicycle is also a good way to go to school.Students take bicycle can make exercise.What's more,it is very convient for students to go to school. In tne end,in my opinion,Ilike going to school by bicycle,because it doesn't afroid to come upon a traffic jam.