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字数：300 满分：100分
全文结构较为严谨；文中从句使用量偏少了；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
we can't deny that it's a good habit in saving money.but,it depends on what we buy and the stuffs you buy is worth to pay . i am the the type of person who is crazy in reading .i can eat nothing for saving money to buy books of what i like.as far as i am concerned. i think it’s worth for me to do that. althought,i spend momey,i gain kownledge thought reading books .there is no comparability between money with books.on the contrary.i think it' utterly waste money on computer games . nowadays,mostly teenagers put money in the computer games,they think it is't a big deal.and they would't carefully think thr money their patents earn is so hard the time of saving money .you should save,but if not,don't saving money in anytime
