邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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How to improve school safety when I heard a news which is ampus violence.As the saying goes:"children are the flowers to the country.children are the hoping to the future."So,we should take measures to protect students. Firstly,we can strenghen the awareness of safe.secondly, we can sent more security guard to walk in the campus.Tirdly,we should pay more attention to strike crimser .What matter most is that we should to find out the root of violence and to solve it.only the way can we protect students safe. les's do for it .Future belong to yung man.