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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(31)写作:Less Pressure Make Life Better

发布时间:2013-07-15 16:25浏览次数:567
要求:

初中即将毕业,同学们都感到压力挺大。就此问题,你在英语课上做了一个以”Less Pressure Make Life Better”为题的值日报告,谈谈你的做法,与同学们分享经验,

内容包括:

普遍存在的压力:同学关系;考试
我过去的压力:父母的期望;学习

我成功缓解压力 的办法及效果;


要求:

1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;

2.词数80左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总次数。


Less Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you!
用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

We usually under the common pressure.Such as classmates' relationship,coming exam.My parents expected me to get much better grade,they gave the pressure to me at the same time.And when I was studying,I always feel under pressure.It is a kind of bad feeling.I don't like it and it will make things worse,so we must deal with it. There are some ways we can do.First,to be honest to your friend,share the feelings and thoughts to each other.Second,make a conversation to your parents,tell them how hard you tried and you'll always try your best.The more hope they give,just the more pressure I get.Third,believe yourself.Work hard and don't care the result.However,sometimes failure is not a big deal.Don't make yourself under the pressure,it will be easily to get a better result.

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