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I am like playing football very much. That is my favorite sport. I was fall in love with it in a chance. I was found a football on my way home from school. From that day on, I usually play it with my friends. I am very crazy with it. I usually tranning and competing with my classmates.All we can make fun from it. One of my favorite soccor ball stars is Beckham who is an English man. I hope I can be a professional football player in the future.