注意文中个别的句子错误;结构良好,但是语言不流畅;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
There is a photo of jim's familys on the table jims father is tall and strong he is a teacher jim's mother is very beautiful she wears a red dress she is a nurs jim and his brother are student his brother is very lovely he likes singing jim is good at watch TV