小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强。

There is a photo of jim's family on the table jims father is tall and strong he is a teacher his mother is very beautiful she wears a red dress she is a nurse jim and his brother are students his brother is very lovely he likes singing jim is good at watch TV