注意文中个别的句子错误;结构良好,但是语言不流畅;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
Our house is very beautiful It is a small biluding there is a small garden in the yard the flowers are blooming they are all the colours the rainbow there is a dog in our house it is very cute it likes to run and run and wag heself tail there is a tall tree in our yard its leaves are green its flowes are red it is very flourish