注意文中个别的句子错误;结构良好,但是语言不流畅;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
Our house is very beautiful It is a small biluding there is a small garden in the yard the flowers are blooming they are all the colours the rainbow there is a dog in our house it is very cute it likes to run and run and wag himself tail there is a tall tree in our yard its leaves are green its flowes are red it is very flourish