小学二年级英语作文:Our house

从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强。

Our house is very beautiful It is a small biluding there is a small garden in the yard the flowers are blooming they are all the colours the rainbow there is a dog in our house it is very cute it likes to run and run and wag himself tail there is a tall tree in our yard its leaves are green its flowers are red it flourish