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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中衔接词丰富。
Stress takes place in everywhere. How come nowadays people are so stressful? The simplest answer is that they do not relax. They always concern and worry all the things. When people are under pressure continuously, it does not only affect independent emotion, but also their families, friends and people around them in terms of communication and relationship. Stress can be advantageous to us, like it can become a motivation, pushing us to do better. However, the very important thing is that you should keep a good mood and with bravery to face challenges and new things. When people face and accumulate too much stress in daily life, they could no longer enjoy their life. Worse still, they will suffer from physiological disease. At that time, stress ruins the life. Nothing can be perfect. The citizens usually feel stressful and do not find a way to release pressure. When time goes, stress can hinder the life. Thus, when you are under stress, you are encouraged to talk to your trustful family and friends.
