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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(31)写作:Less Pressure Make Life Better

发布时间:2013-07-15 16:25浏览次数:567
要求:

初中即将毕业,同学们都感到压力挺大。就此问题,你在英语课上做了一个以”Less Pressure Make Life Better”为题的值日报告,谈谈你的做法,与同学们分享经验,

内容包括:

普遍存在的压力:同学关系;考试
我过去的压力:父母的期望;学习

我成功缓解压力 的办法及效果;


要求:

1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;

2.词数80左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总次数。


Less Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you!
用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

Less Pressure Makes Better Life Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in class. They had me study all day. even send me to all kinds of classes on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally they understand me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.. Less pressure makes better life. Thank you!

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