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字数:300 满分:100分
作者用词生动多样,高级词汇使用比较准确,但有少数拼写错误;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用。
Contemporary youths should be rational consumers, making a reasonable approach of using money, neither too excessive nor irreasonable. Forming a sensible consuming concept is not very easy, but through the experience we consumed, we can find a scientific consuming way which is appropiate for us. An intellectual consuming way is not how much we pay, but wheher it is worthwhile to consume. An intellectual consumer has a defined arrangement of his money. For example, on condition that we have a various style of clothes, we have no need to buy a clothes which is in a sale, cheaper than whenever. If we collect all kinds of coupons, with the awareness of using it rather than wasting it, we will consume it and then we can not save money anymore. Supposing that we have no desire of eating or travelling, will we buy group-buy deal to do someting we would not like, just for its cheap price? As a matter of fact, never hearing the cheap price of something, we will not pay money to try it. All in all, temptation of the cheap price is the devil of consuming. Therefore, to resist the temptation of price is very essential to become a sensible consumer. To sum up, to be a smart consumer depends on clear brain on consuming. Think twice before consuming, taking what we really need into account. Managing our money reasonably, using it with a certain amount. Most significantly, to have an intelligent brain and to make a thorough analysis are necessary to be a rational consumer.