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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；文中从句数量过少；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
From: hubin@163.com Date: Dec, 15th, 2008 To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Dear Sir or Madam, I knew your new product of NO.5670 in the date of Dec, 15th to 22nd , i was very interested in it , please send me the price list and instruction . thanks for collaboration, i hope we can establish business relationship. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Hu Bin
