单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;简单句偏多了;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
Hi ! I have a good friend . She is so smart .She is Amy .She is pretty .She likes reading books,listening to music and seeing film.She favourite lesson is math. She is my best friend!!Do you like she??Yes,I think you like she too. Good bye!!I like you!! Thank you !!