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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6329
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题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章衔接手法恰当;作者词汇基础不错,同时请加强单词拼写的检查。

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Dragon Boat Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China, being popular among people both in cities and in countries. How can we obsereve the festival mark, which will give us more knowledge about this Chinese festival. It is of great significance to know about traditional festivals, the precoius possession we should cherish all the time. Dragon Boat Festival orginated from a historic legend thousands years ago. A distinguished poet, Qu Yuan, sacrificed his life, jumping in to a river. What Qu Yuan impressed people a lot was his spirit of bravery and his favor for his nation, which inspired and encouraged people to struggle for themselves. Therefore, with the purpose to be im memory of Qu Yuan, Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of May in lunar clendar. People celebrated this festival in many way, in which the most prevailent one is to eat zongzi, the most representative food on that day. In addition, wonderful and facinating dragon performances are shown in different places in China too, attracting a majority of people to visit. All in all, Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated around China. How can we observe festival mark? To take Dradon Boat Festival as an example, as the festival is coming, the a various commodiates about this festival are displayed in the shops. Seeing such a scene, there is no doubt that the festival is coming. Meanwhile, to know more about the knowledge of traditional national festivals is no exception. As a result, if we pay more attention to observe the mark of festivals, we will gain more than we can. To sup up, we should lay more empathsis on traditional festivals,for we are the later generation to inherit them. Since we are Chinese, we have responsibility to conserve the national wealth, the traditional festivals.

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