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.Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic Games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a Game to me. In the first place, this game will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this game will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. My friend, I really looks forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008. Sincerely yours,
