小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. Her name is LiLy. She is a middle school student. She comes from China.She lives in Beijing. Lily has big eyes and a small mouth ,a round face. On the weekend, she always plays basketball with her friends in the afternoon and watches TV in the evening. I always play computer games with her. I like her very much!