2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend will come to China.I will take him to my hometown ShangHai.ShangHai is a modern city. ShangHai has many famouse buliding like:JingMao Building,Shanghai theater,Shanghai museum and so on. In my oppinion,I will go to there by underground.Because Shanghai has traffic jam in the morning and night.So underground is very fast and convenient. The bound in Shanghai is very beautiful at night.Yu garden has many delicious food.Like:Nanxiang dumpling it is a traditional chinese food.I think my foreign friend will like it.