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2008年专八英语作文真题:College years have prepared you for your future life

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:17浏览次数:4051
要求:
题目 College years have prepared you for your future life
说明 In a few months' time you are going to graduate from university. How do you think your college years have prepared you for your future life? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: What I have learned from my years at university
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分31.5分
评语:

单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

用户练习作文:

In my college years, I have gained a number of things, it make me learn how to be a good person and get abundant knowledge. In the university ,I have made a best friend who helped me a lot during my life. In the meanwhile, I also have learnt how to get along well with each other .

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