单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
In my college years, I have gained a number of things, it make me learn how to be a good person and get abundant knowledge. In the university ,I have made a best friend who helped me a lot during my life. In the meanwhile, I also have learnt how to get along well with each other .