雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但有个别拼写错误；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays, with the steady growth of country's economi development as well as people's living standard, an increasing number of people visit foreign countries every year. However, the issue whether people's tavelling to foreign contries has a positive effect or not is too complex to reach a absolute consensus among the public. Some people state that travelling overseas is benifit to country and society. Others believe it causes many problems. From my perspective, I support the former opinion. First, travelling to foreign countries give people opportunities to study different cultrues which can widen people's scope of knowlogy and horizon. Especially for young people, foreign culture , scenery and experience can inspire people's thinking and creativity.These features are benifit to long-term development of country. Moreover,people travel to foreign country can facilitate the communitation among countries. For example,during travelling, businessmen can find economic opportunities which improve the collaboration between China and foreign country. However, it is not to say travelling abroad has no negative effect. Some people do not respect other countries' law and violate rules of foreign counties, which may harm our country's image. Therefore, our government should enact related laws and regulations to manage travelling abroad activities. In conclusion, travelling abroad has huge positive impact to development of country and people. Government should take its responsibility to manage travelling abroad.