单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also