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We should obey the traffice rules Li Ming and his classmates wanted to go to Mount Jiuhou for the spring field trip. Because spring is the best time to climb mountains. The weather is very fine. It’s not too cold and not too hot. Li Ming and his classmates decided to go there by bike. But on the way, Li Ming made a wrong turn, and a traffic accident happened. Li Ming’s right leg was hurt.( His classmates had to send him to the hospital.) So it’s very important for us to obey the traffice rules. First, when the lights turn red, we must stop. When the lights turn green, we can cross the road. Second, we shouldn’t ride too fast and we should ride on the right of the road. Third,we should always be careful and wear bicycle helmets when we ride bikes. Fourth, if we break the traffice rules, we’ll get a fine.
