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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;请注意分段。

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There is no denying the fact that we are losing trust when we people are contacting with other.For example,on the one hand,some people ruin the balance of market by selling fack commodities.On the other hand,we are always fooled by other people because of trusting others. Then,what should be done to keep trust among human being?To start with,our government ought to sings highly to those heroes who are honest in his part.So that they can inspire our emotion.Secondly,education is important.As we know,one's initial education result to his behave in his life.Thus,schools are urged to teach students how to be aa honest man.Most important of all,it is never too late for us to improve trust among human.So we are supposed to watch us own behave and only in this way can we build a harmonious social.

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