简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
School Rules Every school has its own rules for students.In my school,we must wear school uniforms on weekdays.Most of us doesn't like to wear because the school uniforms are ugly.If I can design our uniforms,we will like to wear them.We should be active and study hard in class.At night we must do our homework on time.If we have any questions we can ask for the teachers.If we read in the library we should keep quiet.We are friendly with our classmates.