小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Now, i want to introduce one of my best friends for you. Fisrtly, she is a outgoing and beautiful girl,who always performs well in almost every examination. What is more , she wears eyeglasses because of the near-sight. On the other hand, she likes to run in her spear time. We study together to learn from each other,which improve our performance when examination.