单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I have two good friends. They are my kindergarten students, we go to school, school and play games. Their names are Amy and rose, Amy likes to eat cakes, roses like wearing beautiful clothes. We go swimming together, we go to fly a kite together last weekend, we take a tent, ready to barbecue, fly a kite.