2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(63)写作:期末考试

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

I will finish my middle school life soon.All these experiences of my middle school life are unforgettable.First of all,I am unwilling to leave my classmates,my friend and my teachers.We have studied and lived together for three years.I remember that I was no good at English in the beginning.But I got help from some peopel,especially with my English teacher's help.I worked hard and did my best.Fanilly my English study was made a big jump.Moreover,I still remember that we traveled to a mountain on Sunday.That was a wonderful experience.We went to there by bike and got the top of the mountain on foot.We sang together,dance together.There was full of laughter.I will never forget my middle school experiences.