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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦120:If I were a teacher…

发布时间:2015-03-31 17:55浏览次数:372
要求:
你喜欢什么样的老师呢?假如你是一位老师,会如何做呢?请以“If I were a teacher…”为题,谈谈你的看法。
要求:
1. 喜欢的老师类型。(至少含一个定语从句)
2. 词数80左右。
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用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
评语:

文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

My dream is to be a teacher, because I like kids very much. If I were a teacher, I have many ways to get along with students. First, as a teacher, I would teach my students all knowledge that I have. Second, I would make friends with my students and communicate more with them. Next, I would know about their hobbies and play with them. Last, I would be strict with them in their schoolwork. After all, studying is more important than playing. I hope I will be a good teacher one day. 

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