文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中衔接词丰富。
My dream is to be a teacher, because I like kids very much. If I were a teacher, I have many ways to get along with students. First, as a teacher, I would teach my students all knowledge that I have. Second, I would make friends with my students and communicate more with them. Next, I would know about their hobbies and play with them. Last, I would be strict with them in their schoolwork. After all, studying is more important than playing. I hope I will be a good teacher one day.