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Dear George, In your last letter you asked me about the household hotel in my hometown, now it's my pleasure to introduce it to you. There are two kinds of rooms, the single-bed room is 30RMB a day while the double-bed room is 20RMB a day. And the dining fee is 20RMB a day. You can either eat with the household, with a manu and you can order what you want to eat. Or you can make dinner yourself. In the hotel, you can take sea-water bath, swim, and climb mountain. Besides, you can take unpaid greenhouse labour volunteerily. I think it's a good way for you to learn China culture and feel the Chinese family atomashpere. best wishes yours Lihua
