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Hello everyone, it's my honor to introduce Nanjing, one of the economy and culture center of China to you. Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu province is located in eastern China, with a population of 5million. Nanjing is an ancient city with a long history of more than 2400 years, it is the capital for 10 dynasties in the history. So Nanjing is a beautiful ancient city with many places of interest, such as Xuanwu lake, Jiming Temple, Stone City, etc, on the other hand, Nanjing is a modern city with many modernized factories and tall buildings.
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