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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(63)写作:期末考试

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:00浏览次数:638
要求:

很多学校在临近期末考试时,将体育课改成语数外等“主课”课程。对此老师和学生有不同的观点,请根据表格提示,谈谈你的看法。


Teacher's idea
1.Time is limited.
2.Knowledge is life
3.The grades are important.


Your ideas


注意:
1.       开头部分已写好,不计入总词数。
2.       所写内容必须包括表格中老师的观点和你的至少三个观点。

3.       词数:80个左右。


In many schools, the PE class will be replaced by Chinese, math or English before the final exam.___________________________________________________________________

用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I will finish my middle school life soon.All these experiences of my middle school life are unforgettable.First of all,I am unwilling to leave my classmates,my friend and my teachers.We have studied and lived together for three years.I remember that I was no good at English in the beginning.But I got help from some people,especially with my English teacher's help.I worked hard and did my best.Fanilly my English study was made a big jump.Moreover,I still remember that we traveled to a mountain on Sunday.That was a wonderful experience.We went there by bike and got the top of the mountain on foot.We sang together,dance together.There was full of laughter.I will never forget my middle school experiences.

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