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高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:20浏览次数:2082
要求:
随着人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车,你班同学就此展开了一次讨论,提出两种不同的观点和看法。请你根据所提供的信息给报社写一封信,
客观介绍这两种看法。 
赞同者认为:
1.方便、快捷、舒适的交通工具;
2.反映出国民生活条件提高,国家富强;
3.带动其他行业发展。
反对者认为:
1.废气污染严重;
2.过多则影响交通,导
致更多事故;
3.停车问题日益突出。
注意
1.信的开头已为你写好;
2.词数:100左右;
3.参考词汇:方便的 convenient;交通 transportation
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇需继续加强,拼写检查要重视。

用户练习作文:

Dear Editor, With the enhancement of people's living standard, more and more people have their own private cars. Our class had a heated discussion about having private cars. Generally there are two different opinions. Some students who support having private cars think that cars are only a transportation tool that is convinient, fast and comfortable. Besides, they argue that it represent the enhancement of living standards and country's power. What's more, car industry should accelarate the development of other related industries. However, some students hold the opposite view that it's no good to have more and more private cars considering the following aspects: first, cars make the air pollution more serious; secondly, the huge amount of cars on the streets bring heavy burden on traffice systems, and it makes not only traffic jams but also accidents. Thirdly, parking lots are relatively less because of the rapid growth of the amount of private cars. Best regards. Yours Lihua

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