句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Well, to be a good child, I should study hard at school. I must listen to the teachers carefully. I should also be friendly to others and take part in all kinds of activities. At home, after I finish my homework, I can help my parents clean the house, wash the dishes and clothes. I should always be polite to them and talk with them as often as possible. And on their birthdays, I will give them presents or do something special to show my love.