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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦121:How can you be a good child

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1. What should you do at school?
2. What can you do to give help at home?
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2. 演说稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
3. 演说稿不少于60词。
Well, to be a good child, I_____________________________

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Well, to be a good child, I should study hard at school. I must listen to the teachers carefully. I should also be friendly to others and take part in all kinds of activities. At home, after I finish my homework, I can help my parents clean the house, wash the dishes and clothes. I should always be polite to them and talk with them as often as possible. And on their birthdays, I will give them presents or do something special to show my love. I will get on well with my classmates.If he/she gets in trouble,I wil help him/her as soon as possible.

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