2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

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This afternoon a charity sale was held on the playground in our shcool.Its purpose was very helpful.When you buy a new book here,It will bring a new book to a child who lives in a poor area at the same time.So most students and teachers take an active part in this activity.The children who lives some poor areas need more chances to get education.It said that books are bridges to knowledge.If a child in poor areas can receive a better education and get more knowledge.I believe their lives will be greatly improved!